Becca - 17 - F
Diegetic titles were good would pay to see a movie that started like
that, mystery, perhaps more exposition, the bed made it seem eerie and
spooky, rom com signified and anchored by the school.
16 - f + 15 - f
liked the film (both of them)
'slice of life' with few comedy and heartfelt moments, 'coming of age'.
good signifiers would help exposition and anchorage, with music. 'mr blue sky'
toast, shower door (neater hand writing) books and envelopes.
New title, provided it was emphasised better.
exposistion through calendar on Feb 14.
intrigued, why the girl is being bullied. the girl likes me. I stand up against the bullies.
the title intrigued me they were creatively done, yes, fairly generic story, has promise.
parallel to the people getting ready, despite being form different ends of the social scale, linked in some manner.
friends more exposition on the romance, peck on the cheek link arms/hold hands arm around
talk but not in presence of bully, boy been civil with here,
felt tried and tested, almost cliché
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